Will you check my English?

Share on Facebook

Kenta

#574390 Wed, 08 Oct 08 07:54 AM

Hello. I wrote a dialogue. Will you check it?

F: Have you bought a new car you were talking about the other day?

M: Not yet, but I'm thinking about buying a big station wagon.

F: I thought you would (do so). I know you love camping.

Thank you!

Kenta

Joined on Fri, Dec 21 2007

Full Member (284)

kenta

Annvan

#574396 Wed, 08 Oct 08 08:34 AM

I'd just change "... a new car..." to "... the new car..."

Annvan

Joined on Mon, Sep 4 2006

The Philippines

Regular Member (614)

Will you check my dialog?(2)
grammar check and restructuring
Yeah, need a grammar check...
Grammar check please

Grammar Check please..
help me with grammar check - urgent - thanks
Need English grammar check
grammar check and restructuring words - urgent...

sentence structure/grammar check needed
check on/check up on/check
Some sentence questions on apostrophe use...
Grammar check (Mel)

Kenta

#574578 Wed, 08 Oct 08 10:08 PM

Hi, Annvan. Thank you very much!

Kenta