Will you check my script?

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Kenta  #486291  Sat, 08 Mar 08 02:54 AM

Hello. First, I have to say sorry. I don't know at which forum I should ask.

I dictated a youtube footage. URL is

My script (unfinished)

 A small Japanese town on the west coast of Japan is backing Barack Obama

all the way. They may know little of his politics, but there is something special

with democratic hopeful is Japanese town is called Obama.

The town of Obama is in full of Obama swing.

His images printed on traditional Japanese cakes and special set of

custom made of Obama chopsticks.

We feel we .. him good luck .. Obama residents.

The towm sent Senator Obama samples of some of their Obama suveniors earlier

this year.

Obama's mayor says that they have never met.

He feels they are .. new friends and ..thank you note from senator with whom this

town shares so much.

 

                                                Thank you. 

 

  
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Marius Hancu  #486328  Sat, 08 Mar 08 10:29 AM

 This is copy/text, not script, which means scenario. 

 

A small Japanese town on the western coast of Japan is backing Barack Obama

all the way. They may know little of his politics, but there is something special

they have in common with the democratic hopeful: the Japanese town is called Obama.

The town of Obama is in full Obama swing.

His images are printed on traditional Japanese cakes and there are special sets of

custom-made Obama chopsticks.

We Obama residents wish him good luck

The town sent Senator Obama samples of some of their Obama souvenirs earlier

this year.

Obama's mayor says that they have never met the senator.

<>He feels they are now friends, especially after receiving a thank-you note from the senator with whom this town shares so much
  
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Kenta  #486479  Sun, 09 Mar 08 01:11 AM

Thank you! But ... 

they have in common with the democratic hopeful:

We Obama residents wish him good luck

Obama's mayor says that they have never met the senator.

He feels they are now friends, especially after receiving a thank-you note

 

I listened again, but I can't catch these phrases.

Does the announcer really say these?

 

 

  
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