Here's the proofread version -
Wish
Just by hearing you say hi,
I can feel like I'm the happiest person in the world
And now I can be sure
I cannot live without you by my side
Then what I need is to talk to you.
It'll suck all of your energy,
It's a dream hearing your voice
This love is so strong that all things I can forgive -
And I could even love my enemies
But I'm not a saint, neither are you
The blood runs hot inside my veins
And when I hear your pretty words,
Your breath isn't enough
Nor can your kisses quench my desire
I want my body licked
I need my nipples bitten
I wish to be totally eaten
And when I reach the highest pleasure
I'm gonna hold you strong
Keeping you deep inside me, and freeze the moment
In order to feel myself no longer alone
Right now I just want to stay lying with you
To have ours bodies joined forever
I could live just by breathing your power
I hope we don't drift apart, never
It's a beautiful poem, Suellen. Keep on writing, your grammar will improve with experience.
Cheers,
- Joy.