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BW2/3  +  318185 Sun, 21 Jan 07 11:15 PM

Many ancient wonders had gone yet the oldest wonder is still there after 50 centuries.

Is the above sentence correct?

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Ant_222  +  318207 Mon, 22 Jan 07 12:33 AM
Not sure whether it sounds ok, but anyway you should use Present Perfect instead of Past Perfect there:

«Many ancient wonders have gone yet the oldest wonder is still there after 50 centuries.»
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Thank you Ant_222,

Why is present perfect  appropriate?

CalifJim  +  318262 Mon, 22 Jan 07 05:41 AM
Many ancient wonders had gone yet the oldest wonder is still there after 50 centuries.
This will make a better sentence if both verbs are from the same point of view.

Present point of view:  present,  present perfect tenses, will, can, ...
Past point of view: past, past perfect tenses, would, could, ...

Many ancient wonders have gone; yet the oldest wonder is still there after 50 centuries.
Many ancient wonders had gone; yet the oldest wonder was still there after 50 centuries.

CJ

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Ant_222  +  318378 Mon, 22 Jan 07 01:53 PM
«Why is present perfect appropriate?»

Well, because you don't care when they disappeared/were destroyed. Present Perfect implies any time interval ending at the present. For exmple, the year 500 B.C - 2007 A.C.

Furthermore, Present perfect focuses on the result rather than the action itself, which is also a good point for you sentence.

Here's Jim's sentence:
«Many ancient wonders had gone; yet the oldest wonder was still there after 50 centuries.» — this sentence tells about some moment in the past. For example,
«By 1812 many ancient wonders had gone; yet the oldest wonder was still there after 50 centuries.»

"had gone" — they had disappeared before 1812. Thus it is pure "past before past".

"was still there" — it still existed in 1812. Simple Past.
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