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Anonymous  #383097  Fri, 22 Jun 07 07:22 PM
Hello!

Should I say I have enclosed my CV with this email for your consideration. OR I have enclosed my CV for your consideration with this email. ?
If by chance both of them are correct, could you tell which one would sound more natural in a formal letter?

Thank you in advance!
Any help will be appreciated.
Please correct all mistakes in my writing, if any.
  
whl626  #383284  Sat, 23 Jun 07 08:53 AM
The first sounds better.
  
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Intelligent Freak  #383324  Sat, 23 Jun 07 11:56 AM

Please find enclosed my CV for your consideration.  (I think there's no need for you to mention "with this email"because it's already given)

  
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