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hi,

I am writing a work experience application letter to ernst and young. i am 15 and in transition year (in ireland). Could you please give me advice on the letter so far and maybe how to round it off nicely. Thanks a lot.

(my address)

Mr. ****,

(address)

O1.10.07

Dear sir/madam,

I am writing to apply for work experience place at Ernst & young between the 23rd and 30th of November 2007.

My name is **** and I am 15 years of age. I’m a transition year student in St. Michael’s College. I did business studies for the junior certificate and for transition year I have chosen Economics as one of my choice subjects. I have a particular interest in Economics, Maths and Science (physics and Biology). I am currently doing the EDSL in school and I am good at word and excel processing.

I hope I can learn from this work experience and hope it will guide me in the future. This, I feel would be invaluable, first hand experience that will give me an insight to what working in such an established company like Ernst and young.

With Respect,

________________

thanks
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Philippe3572hi,

I am writing a work experience application letter to Ernst and Young. I am 15 and in transition year (in Ireland). Could you please give me advice on the letter so far and maybe how to round it off nicely. Thanks a lot.

(my address)

[DATE]

Mr. ****,

(address)

O1.10.07

Dear sir/madam, [above you seem to have a name. If you do, then Dear Mr XXXX]

I am writing to apply for a work experience place at Ernst & Young between the 23rd and 30th of November 2007.

My name is **** and I am 15 years of age. I’m a transition year student in St. Michael’s College. I did business studies for the junior certificate and for transition year I have chosen Economics as one of my choice [elective] subjects. I have a particular interest in Economics, Maths and Science (Physics and Biology). I am currently doing the EDSL in school and I am good at Word and Excel processing.

I hope I can learn a great deal from this work experience and that it will guide me in the future. This, I feel it will would be invaluable, first-hand experience that will give me an insight about working in such an established company like Ernst and Young.

I very much look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely [if you had a name]

[if you had no name, and had to start "Dear Sir/Madam", then end Yours faithfully]


________________

thanks
You need to say that you are prepared to do whatever the company has for you to do. Add a sentence to this effect at the beginning of your last paragraph.

You must be consistent in the company name - is it an ampersand > & or "and" in the title. Accuracy will count in your favour with a possible employer.
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thanks for the advice. that helps alot, and makes alot more sense! ill revise it.
Philippe3572Thanks for the advice. That helps a lot, and makes a lot more sense! I'll revise it.
Glad to be of help and hope it works.

Please take note of the corrections above - accuracy is a skill you really need to build.
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Anonymous:
I Have this work experience thing that i have to do and i have no idea how to lay it out or how to basically write it at all it's not fat away infact i think it's due in next frday and i'm realli realli panicking about it i can't sleep i'm that panicked i don't want to write my own version cause i'm scaredd that i'll rite it and mess it all up

Can someone please help me to write this please

Many thanksss

xxxxxxx

Paige strong 15 Emotion: wink
Hi

I never see experience letter for people under 18.
But this post is useful.

Apart from that, other one is same at: experience letter
Best rgs
Ngo
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Anonymous:
thank u

coz i was thinking to apply for work experience in my GP
Anonymous:
I am writting work experience application letter for my assignment. Could you please give me some advice? thank a lot!!!!
OK. Please show us what you have written so far.
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