Dj Bueno  +  123967 Thu, 04 Aug 05 08:32 PM As the birds fly in the sky I'll give you two presents Seagulls taught me how to choose A sparkle from the sun And a fabulous blue after the cruise.   During the splendid sunset I'll hire smart jet By using some colorful smokes I'll draw huge hearts in a plate.   When the dark rules the night Moonlight will be my guide I'll quieten all the noises down Since only for you nigtingales Will be singing a ballad.   With the help of an inspring breeze I'll take pictures of the calm seas Later I'll smarten them up In order to give you the the feeling of ease.   One day I'll make a wondrous bunch of flowers Containing all kinds of fragrant roses Magical beauties these are That will bring you happiness.   ( I wrote this poem to my English teacher, she said she really liked it ) Dj Bueno Joined on Mon, Jul 18 2005 Senior Member 2,087 Gulyabani vardır, korkacak bir şey yoktur.

	anita_a  +  124328 Fri, 05 Aug 05 10:26 PM This is a good poem. I liked the first 3 stanzas.Frankly, the last 2 stanzas don't go well with them.Post more of your work for us. anita_a Joined on Tue, Jul 27 2004 Sunny California Regular Member 822 Cheers,Anita

	Dj Bueno  +  124330 Fri, 05 Aug 05 10:32 PM Thanks ok I will. Dj Bueno