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COUME
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Wed, 15 Feb 06 01:39 PM
Hello,
I need to change my answering machine message to record a more professional one as I will be looking for a new job pretty soon. Could someone tell me if the following message is grammatically correct and sounds professional enough?
Hello, you are through to ***, I am not available at the moment but please leave me a message with your name and number and I will get back to you as soon as possible. Thank you.
Thanks in advance for your comments/tips/...
Regards, Ludovic
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Mister Micawber
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Wed, 15 Feb 06 01:41 PM
I would just change the beginning a little, Ludovic: Hello, this is ***. I am not available at the moment, but
please leave me a message with your name and number, and I will get back
to you as soon as possible. Thank you.
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COUME,
3 yr 280 days ago
Thank you very much for the quick reply!
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rishonly
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Wed, 15 Feb 06 06:34 PM
Mister Micawber wrote: | I would just change the beginning a little, Ludovic:
Hello, this is ***. I am not available at the moment, but please leave me a message with your name and number, and I will get back to you as soon as possible. Thank you.
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One change that I would prefer is "at this" instead of "at the".
My attempt:
Hi,
This is ..... Sorry, I am currently unavailable. Please leave your name, number, and message. I will get back to you as soon as possible. Thank You.
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Regards, Krishna
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Goodman
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Wed, 15 Feb 06 07:56 PM
Making a recorded message is a simple task that most people don’t give much thought to. I used to leave my name on the recording but only learned that “bad” people can tie the name and phone numbers together and turn you into a potential crime victim. So changed my recording as follows:
“ Hello, I am not available to answer you call at this time. Please leave a detailed message and the time you called after the beep. I will return your call promptly. Thank you “
However, if you are waiting for a call potentially with employment potential, you may want to include you name.
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COUME
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Sun, 19 Feb 06 03:51 PM
Thank you all. Once I recorded the new message, I will let you know what I recorded ![Smile [:)]](/emoticons/emotion-1.gif) Cheers, Ludo
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rishonly
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Sun, 19 Feb 06 04:20 PM
COUME wrote: | Thank you all.
Once I recorded the new message, I will let you know what I recorded ![Smile [:)]](/emoticons/emotion-1.gif)
Cheers, Ludo
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Great! Just in case, make sure you say "get back to you" instead of "get you back". A friend of mine did that, in fact.
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COUME
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Sun, 19 Feb 06 04:41 PM
I did this mistake back in 2001-2002 when I was studying in England, and someone told me the error after almost 10 months... so now, I'm quite careful with this one
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