Would please help me say this in a better way and grammatically correct?

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Nancy19820

#293900 Thu, 16 Nov 06 02:47 PM

Thank you for replying to my request. However, my question was who I should contact for locating a AVC restaurant in ABC, DE. The city and citizens are interested in having AVC located here and wanted to know what we need do to do to have a AVC restaurant in City of ABC, DE. If we want to dine at AVC, we have to drive to DF; which is too far for us.

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I would like to improve my writing. Thank you for your help.

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#294129 Fri, 17 Nov 06 07:17 AM

I made a few changes - but your original letter is OK.

Thank you for replying to my request. I would like to obtain the contact details of the best person to talk to about establishing a AVC restaurant in ABC, DE. The city and citizens are interested in having AVC located here; and we would like to know what we need do to make this happen. At present, if we want to dine at AVC, we have to drive to DF; which is too far for us.

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