Kenta  +  964217 Sat, 07 Nov 09 11:57 AM Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?   No. 1   M: I'll have strawberry ice cream for dessert.   F: You'd better not. Don't you realize how much sugar ( there are ) in it?   M: But it has real strawberry ( there's real strawberry in it). It says so on the package.   F: Sugar is one of the worst things if you are [ want ] to lose your weight.   No. 2   M: I don't think it will [ is going to ] rain this evening.   F: Why not? [ Why do you think so? ] Don't you see the black clouds in the sky?   M: Of course, yes. But we can see the blue sky in the west.      It means it'll be fine.                                             Thank you.        kenta   Kenta Joined on Fri, Dec 21 2007 Regular Member 530 kenta

	optilang  +  964252 Sat, 07 Nov 09 01:02 PM Hi No. 1   M: I'll have strawberry ice cream for dessert.   F: You'd better not. Don't you realize how much sugar ( there are )  (there) is in it?   M: But it has real strawberry strawberries (in it)( there's real strawberry in it). It says so on the package. - an alternative - But it's made with real strawberries. It says so on the packet.   F: Sugar is one of the worst things if you are [ want ] to lose your weight. No. 2   M: I don't think it will [ is going to ] rain this evening.   F: Why not? [ Why don't you think so? ] Don't    Can't (just to avoid repetition of 'don't')   you see the black clouds in the sky?   M: Of course, yes. But we can see the there is blue sky in the west.      It means it'll be fine. optilang Joined on Tue, May 13 2008 Poland Senior Member 2,521 OptiNative British English Speaker Wherever I may roam, I'm still a Londoner.

	Kenta  +  965120 Sun, 08 Nov 09 01:04 PM Thank you, optilang. Your comments are very helpful!                                                     kenta Kenta