Would you check my grammar&help me to say it in a better way?Thank you much

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Nancy1982

#257893 Mon, 21 Aug 06 03:09 PM

Good Morning Dawn and Gail:

Hope you have a great weekend and your day goes well so far. I’m writing to ask if you could come to AB Business Association (ABBA) as guess speakers on September 25 at 6:30 PM. I spoke to one of the council members and the members of ABBA would be happy to have you at the meeting. I would like to invite you to the evening meeting to speak to the businesses about the State’s resources such as becoming state vendors, how to put their businesses on the State website, networking, funding, programs, or any resources that State offers to small businesses to help them growth. If all possible as Gail mentioned, I would like to invite Tony Grene with you to the meeting as well.

Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to hearing from you and having you at the AB Business Association.

Nancy1982

Joined on Wed, May 17 2006

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Would like to improve my writing

Grammar

Mister Micawber

#257896 Mon, 21 Aug 06 03:15 PM

Good morning, Dawn and Gail,

Hope you had a great weekend and your day is going well so far. I’m writing to ask if you could come to the AB Business Association (ABBA) as guest speakers on September 25 at 6:30 PM. I spoke to one of the council members and the members of ABBA would be happy to have you at the meeting. I would like to invite you to the evening meeting to speak to the businesses about the state’s resources, such as becoming state vendors, putting their businesses on the state website, networking, funding, programs, or any resources that the state offers to small businesses to help them grow. If at all possible, as Gail mentioned, I would like to invite Tony Green to the meeting as well.