would you correct grammar for me? Thank you for your help.

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Nancy1982

#262682 Mon, 04 Sep 06 10:16 PM

Good Morning All:
Hope you had a great holiday weekend. September 20, or 27 is/are fine for me. Where will we meet?
Have a great day!

Hello A:
Hope you had a great weekend. Thank you for correcting the flyer. I have confirm with the sponsor of Hantity Business Association., and unfortunately they'll not have a meeting in September. However, I would like to invite you to the October 17 meeting sponsored by the City. We will invite two to three representatives from the DCA as well and have something like a panel. I'm sorry any inconvenience this may have caused and I look forward to having you at the October meeting.
Once again thank you for your time and have a great day!

Nancy1982

Joined on Wed, May 17 2006

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Would like to improve my writing

Grammar

Mister Micawber

#262980 Tue, 05 Sep 06 04:14 PM

Good Morning All,

Hope you had a great holiday weekend. September 20 or 27 is fine for me. Where will we meet? Have a great day!

Hello A,

Hope you had a great weekend. Thank you for correcting the flyer. I have confirmed with the sponsor of Hantity Business Association, and unfortunately they'll not have a meeting in September. However, I would like to invite you to the October 17 meeting sponsored by the City. We will invite two to three representatives from the DCA as well, and have something like a panel. I'm sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused and I look forward to having you at the October meeting.

Once again, thank you for your time and have a great day!