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As you suggested, I have contacted other schools regarding City of ABC Arts & Music Festival and received very well responses. One of the teachers has told me the students at My Tho had performed a shown tune at Cho County 75th Birthday and received great applauses. I think it would be great if this group could participate in City of ABC Arts & Music Festival. Do you know who would be the person I could contact about this?