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RE: applying for the position of a caregiver>>

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Dear Sir or Madam,>>

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I am interested in applying for a position of a caregiver in lace>Canadalace> as advertised by the agency “***”-***.>>

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My experience working as a full-time English teacher prepared me for such duties. I feel I have a range of relevant skills. They have greatly developed both through my degree and my work experience. My job gave me the ability to deal with children and to get well along with the other people. I enjoy giving and receiving love. I have chosen my profession because it having to do with service to other people. The major force that has directed me is the sense of service and dedication.>>

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Learning and education is very important to me. I think that such experience will be a good contribution to my career. I like to find things out for myself instead of being told or reading about them in books. I like traveling because it allows me to expand my mind. I have always wanted to encounter new places and people, who can teach me things that I do not know and who can expose me to new experiences.>>

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Enclosures:>>

• CV>>
• A copy of translated diploma>>
• Letters of recommendation>>
• Photos >>

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Thank you for your time and consideration.>>

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Yours faithfully,>>

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Thank you very much. This is the first cover letter in my life and it is quite important to me. Think sounds good?