How would you punctuate this sentence

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Anonymous  #462810  Thu, 10 Jan 08 10:19 PM

The town where my father grew up has a population of only 1,222.



I need someone to let me know what commas are needed, if any.  I think the sentence should be this way:

The town, where my father grew up, has a population of only 1,222.

"Where my father grew up", is a nonessential clause, therefore, needs to be seperated by commas.  My instructor says not so, that information is needed for the sentence make sense.  Thanks for any help.
  
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Grammar Geek  #462818  Thu, 10 Jan 08 10:42 PM

Unless you are already talking about "the town" and everyone reading it already knows which town you mean, the fact that your father grew up there is essential information - it's a restrictive clause and the commas do NOT belong.

  
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English Toolbox Co.  #463866  Mon, 14 Jan 08 05:43 AM
Barbara is correct. If you were saying "Springfield, where my father grew up, has a population... " you would then require commas, because your reader may not realize that Springfield is a place, and so the defining clause explains this. But "the town where my father grew up" is one idea: nothing is explaining something else.

  
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