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#514510 Fri, 16 May 08 06:19 PM

Enclosed is an article, “Traditional Small Business Marketing is Dead.” I wanted to share with you this article and hope that you might find the information useful.

Is the above sentence grammatically correct along with the commas used?

Thank you in advance for your help.

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Feebs11

#514534 Fri, 16 May 08 07:20 PM

The only alteration I would make is to put the full stop outside the quotation marks round the article title.

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Grammar Geek

#514541 Fri, 16 May 08 07:43 PM

If you are writing this for a US audience, then the period stays inside the quotes.

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Barbara, who answers in American English.

optilang

#514543 Fri, 16 May 08 08:00 PM

I would write this sentence as follows:

Enclosed is an article (entitled), "Traditional Small Business Marketing is Dead". I wanted to share this article with you and hope that you will find the information useful.