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safeer  #490619  Wed, 19 Mar 08 11:50 AM

GOOD MANNERS
 Good manners are very important. They separate a gentleman from an ordinary man. A bad-mannered person is like an animal. Good manners need to be learned and cultivated from the early age. Good manners mean good and acceptable behavior with others. It means polite and dignified inter-course with others. We should always be good mannered. We should be thankful for any service done to us. We should not interfere in their matters. It is ill-manners to put a finger into your nose or ear while talking. We should use our handkerchief while sneering and yawning. Plucking flowers and walking on the lawns in a park is a bad manner. By being good mannered we can make the world a better and far happier place.

  
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Mister Micawber  #490876  Thu, 20 Mar 08 12:56 AM
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Good ideas, Safeer, but your essay has no structure at all-- it is just a series of sentences.  The structure:  Introduction / Thesis statement / Body of essay / Conclusion.



GOOD MANNERS

Good manners are very important. They separate a gentleman from an ordinary man. A bad-mannered person is like an animal. Good manners need to be learned and cultivated from an early age. Good manners means good and acceptable behavior to others. It means polite and dignified intercourse with others. We should always be well-mannered. We should be thankful for any service done to us. We should not interfere in others' affairs. It is ill-mannered to put a finger into your nose or ear while talking. We should use our handkerchief while sneezing and yawning. Plucking flowers and walking on the lawns in a park is bad manners. By being well-mannered we can make the world a better and far happier place.
  
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