write a letter to ask about scholarship

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Hampeh

#488496 Thu, 13 Mar 08 03:04 PM

Dear teachers and friends,

Here is the scenario: when you surf internet this morning, you found something interesting. Scholarship to further study in engineering, part time or full time. Write an email to ask about the scholarship.

Dear John,

Advertisement on the internet is referred. www.abc.com
I’m interested to join the scholarship training. For your information, I have experience in engineering for more than 5 years. Herewith I attached my resume for your reference.
If there is anything else, please let me know.

Your kind co-operation and assistance would be very much appreciated.

Thank you.

Best regards,

MyName

Am I miss anything important here? Anything else to ask? Thanks for your advice.

Hampeh

Joined on Wed, Nov 29 2006

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Mister Micawber

#488685 Fri, 14 Mar 08 02:55 AM

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Your email needs a lot of improvement. Please study on-line examples of application letters.

Dear Mr [Surname],

With reference to your advertisement at www.abc.com, I am interested in applying for the scholarship you offer.

I have over five years of experience in engineering [as (position) at (company) and as (position) at (company)]. I haveattached my resume for your reference. If you require any further information, please let me know.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Mister Micawber

Joined on Wed, Aug 4 2004

Yokohama

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'The question is,' said Humpty Dumpty, 'which is to be master-- that's all.' . 'A fabis abstineto' - Anon

Resume, Application letters

Hampeh

#489163 Sat, 15 Mar 08 09:38 AM

Thanks Mister Micawber for your reply and your advice. Sample of Job Application Letter help me a lot even though the purpose of the letter is different.

http://jobsearch.about.com/od/morejobletters/a/jobappletter.htm

How about if I change to this:

[Name of recipient]

[Address of Company A]

[Phone of recipient]

[Date]

Dear Mr [Name of recipient],

With reference to your advertisement at www.abc.com, I am interested in applying for the scholarship you offer.

The opportunity presented in the advertisement is very interesting, and I believe that my strong technical experience and education will make me very competitive candidate for this position.

I have Degree in Computer Engineering from MIT and currently still pursuing my Master in Software Engineering at University of Oxford. I have 2 more papers and should be finish in May this year and I will be graduating on October this year. Besides that, I also have Certified Cisco Network Associate (CCNA).

I have over five years of experience in various positions as Technical Consultant, Engineer, and Project Manager in various companies; Company ABC, Company DEF and Company GHI.

I have attached my resume for your reference. Should you require any further information, please let me know.

I can be reached anytime via my cell phone, 123456 or my email, myemail@yahoo.com. Thank you very much for your time and consideration, I look forward to speaking with you about this scholarship opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

[My Name]

Hampeh

Resume, Universities, Yours sincerely, Dates, Application letters, Sample

Mister Micawber

#489355 Sun, 16 Mar 08 12:40 AM

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Much, much, MUCH better.

Dear Mr [Name of recipient],

With reference to your advertisement atwww.abc.com,I am interested in applying for the scholarship you offer.

The opportunity presented in theadvertisement is very interesting, and I believe that my strong technicalexperience and education will make me a very competitive candidate for thisposition.

I have a bachelor's degree in Computer Engineering fromMIT and am currently pursuing my master's in Software Engineering at the Universityof Oxford. I have two more papers to complete and should be finished in May this year, graduating in October. I am also a Certified CiscoNetwork Associate (CCNA).

I have over five years of experience invarious positions as Technical Consultant, Engineer, and Project Manager in variouscompanies: Company ABC, Company DEF and Company GHI.

I have attached my resume for yourreference. Should you require any further information, please let me know. I can be reached at any time via my cellphone, 123456, or my email, myemail@yahoo.com.

Thank you very much for your time andconsideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this scholarshipopportunity.

Yours sincerely,

[My Name]

Mister Micawber

Resume, Yours sincerely, Dates