Pls help me write a letter claiming a dead body

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devilcupid  #475314  Sun, 10 Feb 08 05:52 PM
Dear all

My father died last December 2007, he is working on a company in Middle East. Our problem is that until now the company hasn’t able to send my fathers body back here in our place.  I would like to summit a claim letter to my father’s company. One thing I have a problem with it, I don't know how to write a request letter for it. Could you please help me how  it if you have any idea?

Thanks for your cooperation!

With best wishes!

Ronald Jude

  
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Clive  #475358  Sun, 10 Feb 08 07:56 PM
Hi,
Just begin by writing what you would say if you were talking face to face with a company official. Then post it here, and we will help you with it.

I'm very sorry about your father.

Best wishes, Clive
  
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devilcupid  #475460  Mon, 11 Feb 08 01:56 AM

Thanks for your reply here ‘s my draft..I'm not sureif its correct the grammar or wordings..


February 11, 2007

 

Dear sir/ma'am,

 

We'd really appreciate your help with this.

Since we all know that my father [Father’s name], died last December 2007 due to hipper tension. Its been almost two months since my father died.  I regret to say that I was unhappy with your cooperation in processing my fathers sending back home,but we hope that this unhappiness will not turned to anger by the way that your company is like ignored my fathers death, sorry if I fell it that way but that’s how I sees. I’m hoping that your doing your very best and I do hope that your company honor its obligations.

I hope you’ll give us even a single call or letter from your company. My brother have tried many times to follow-up the status of my father but still the company hasn’t any final answers on when will be my father can be sent back home.

Since we know you wish to uphold the good reputation of your company, I trust this information will be of interest and use to you, I’m relying on you to help us in this matter.

I look forward to receiving your response  to resolve this matter as soon as possible, but if you would care to discuss it you can contact me [my number].

 

 Yours sincerely,

[My name]

  
Mister Micawber  #475479  Mon, 11 Feb 08 02:46 AM

February 11, 2007

 

Dear Sir or Madam:

We would really appreciate your help with a serious personal matter.

My father [Father’s name], died last December [date], 2007.  It has been almost two months since my father died.  Iregret to say that we have been very dissatisfied with your cooperation in sending myfather's remains back home. I’m hopingthat you are now doing your best, and I do hope that your company will honor its obligations.

Mybrother has tried many times to contact you regarding this matter, but your company has yet to supply any definite answer on when my fathercan be returned to his home.  We have not received any communication from you, either by phone or mail.

We presume that you wish to uphold the good reputation of your company, and I trustthis information will be of value to you.  We rely on you to help us in this matter.

I look forward to receiving your timely response in order to resolve this matter as soon as possible.  If you would care to discuss this further, please contact me at [my number].

 

 Yours sincerely,

  
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devilcupid  #475527  Mon, 11 Feb 08 06:23 AM
Thank you very much for your help in proofreading my letter its really a big help..thanks a lot to all the replies!..GOD bless u
  
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