HOW TO WRITE A LETTER TO MY TEACHER

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Zoe584000

#275874 Wed, 04 Oct 06 03:37 AM

Help! Tomorrow is world teachers' day.I want to know how to write a letter to show my care?

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How to Write a Letter

Clive

#275905 Wed, 04 Oct 06 06:25 AM

Hi Zoe,

Welcome to the Forum.

If you were talking to your teacher, what would you say to him/her?

Think about that. Try to write those words in a letter, starting with Dear Teacher, . . . .

Post your letter here. We will give you helpful comments. OK?

Best wishes, Clive,

Clive

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How to Write a Letter

Zoe584000

#276396 Thu, 05 Oct 06 11:51 AM

first,i 'm so glad that you can help me!Thanks a lot !!

P.S. i'm student of grate 9 ,so my english isn't very well...

it's my letter:

Dear Mr.Chen,

Recently,i heard October 5 is the World Teachers' Day.So i want to say:"Happy Teachers' Day!"to you.I think cards are seem impersonal.Writing a letter can really show my care.So i try that.

As you are my teacher,i want to thank for your help. I enjoyed being taught by you. You are an excellent teacher i've ever seen.

To be a teacher will be very tired and boring.Especially you, you are so young, but you still choose this job in your youth.Everyday, you ought to correct so many work.But you enjoy it. Your spirit influence me!

In my view,great teachers do more than teach,they encourage and inspire.you've done all of them. You make a dull lesson become exciting.You make me start loving English.Thank you all the time.

No matter you will still work as a teacher or not. I think you are the best!

Once again,Happy teachers' day!

Wish you happiness ang health forever!

Yours,

ZOE

This is my letter, hope you can correct it for me and give me some suggestions!Thank you!(Because of the National Day,i should send it to my teacher on 9 October)

Zoe584000

How to Write a Letter

Clive

#276448 Thu, 05 Oct 06 02:13 PM

Hi Zoe,

Dear Mr.Chen,

Recently, I heard October 5 is World Teachers' Day, so I want to say "Happy Teachers' Day!" to you. I think cards seem impersonal. Writing a letter can really show my care, so I am trying that.

As you are my teacher, I want to thank for your help. I enjoy being taught by you. You are the most excellent teacher I've ever seen.

To be a teacher must be very tiring and boring. Especially for you, you are so young, but you still chose this job in your youth. Everyday, you need to correct so much work, but you enjoy it. Your spirit influences me!

In my view, great teachers do more than teach, they encourage and inspire. You've done all of these. You make a dull lesson become exciting. You make me start loving English. Thank you all the time.

No matter whether you still work as a teacher or not, I think you are the best!

Once again, Happy Teachers' Day!

Wishing you happiness and health forever!

Yours,

ZOE

I think this letter will make your teacher very happy. It's much better than a card.

Best wishes, Clive

Clive

How to Write a Letter

Zoe584000

#276518 Thu, 05 Oct 06 04:28 PM

thank you for your help! you are so carefully to see my letter.!THANKS

Zoe584000

How to Write a Letter

Anonymous

#293857 Thu, 16 Nov 06 11:56 AM

Recently, I heard October 5 is World Teachers' Day, so I want to say "Happy Teachers' Day!" to you. I think cards seem impersonal. Writing a letter can really show my care, so I am trying that.
As you are my teacher, I want to thank for your help. I enjoy being taught by you. You are the most excellent teacher I've ever seen.
To be a teacher must be very tiring and boring. Especially for you, you are so young, but you still chose this job in your youth. Everyday, you need to correct so much work, but you enjoy it. Your spirit influences me!
In my view, great teachers do more than teach, they encourage and inspire. You've done all of these. You make a dull lesson become exciting. You make me start loving English. Thank you all the time.

No matter whether you still work as a teacher or not, I think you are the best!

Once again, Happy Teachers' Day!

Wishing you happiness and health forever!

Yours,