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How to write a love poem for my girlfriend
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Anonymous  #356251  Thu, 26 Apr 07 09:35 PM

u guys should hear my peom.

cuddle me in ur arms,

snuggle my close,

kiss my lips,

baby im all urs love u with all my heart

                                                                                              Jesse.
  
Anonymous  #356404  Fri, 27 Apr 07 02:41 AM

That is awesome it's my girlfriends birthday 2mmorrow so that's a cool thing 2 tell her!

THANK U THANK U THANK U THANK U!!!!
  
MorningDew  #363146  Fri, 11 May 07 12:04 AM

 Anita_a wrote:
How about this?

I don't want anything from you
I want to give you my love
I don't want to see your face
I want to lock you in my heart
I don't want to feel your touch
I want you to dwell in my being
I don't want loving words from you
I want to sing love songs to you
I don't want you to live with me
I want to die loving you.


Hope it helps you...

Anita you have a very special way of writing poems. Keep it up with your good work Smile [:)]
  
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MorningDew  #363151  Fri, 11 May 07 12:11 AM
 Anonymous wrote:

The best of friends,
Can change a frown,
Into a smile,
when you feel down.

The best of friends,
Will understand,
Your little trials,
And lend a hand.

The best of friends,
Will always share,
Your secret dreams,
Because they care.

The best of friends,
Worth more than gold,
Give all the love,
A heart can hold.

this is    my friendship.
 u like it  my friendship
tell me i am waiting for ur e-mail send  me ?

take care  my friend...............................

my name jay


I love this poem very much. Nicely written Smile [:)]

  
MorningDew  #363152  Fri, 11 May 07 12:16 AM
 Anonymous wrote:

Red Rose

Look in my eyes and tell me you care,
So to your heart all my love I can share.

Look in my soul and make me feel safe.
Baby I Love You...Till my dying day.

Tell me you“ll never go, tell me you“ll stay,
Tell me you“ll love me even though your away.

Take my hand and take my heart,
but hold it gently so it don“t fall apart.

I promise my love to only your heart,
Because some day a life with you I want to start.

I“ll never let go because you mean too much.
I crave for your kisses and your gentle soft touch.

Give me your hand and I“ll give you my soul.
Take my love and never let go.

I“ll promise, my love, it“s for you I shall live,
And a single red rose I shall give to you.

 

What a poem anon.... thanks for sharing this with us Smile [:)]
  
Anonymous  #363567  Fri, 11 May 07 06:28 PM
roses are red vilots are blue you love me and i love you
  
Anonymous  #365214  Tue, 15 May 07 03:08 PM

YOU THE APPLE OF MY EYE

YOU THE REASON THAT I LIE ;-)

YOU THE ONLY 1 THAT CAN MAKE ME CRY

N WITHOUT YOU I WILL SURELY DIE

EVERY BREATH THAT I TAKE......

.....IS ALL FOR U FOR GODS SAKE! MWAH

BUT SERIOUSLY LUV............. U MY PURE WHITE DOVE!

U MY SHINNING STAR N WITHOUT YOUR LUV I WONT GET REALLY FAR!

I LUV 4 U
  
Forbes  #378707  Tue, 12 Jun 07 10:07 PM

What are you going to say if your beloved says: "That's lovely - did you write it?"

What you should do is say: "I'm not very good at poetry, but I found this poem. It says how I feel about you."
  
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Anonymous  #381696  Tue, 19 Jun 07 10:22 PM
yh but wen it says i dont want to see u ittl make it more worse
  
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