meimei MianDianRen  +  764744 Thu, 04 Jun 09 07:23 AM Dear all Colud you please check the following short writing? Thanks   Her communication skills, both written and verbal, are very good. Furthermore, Mary also has outstanding organizational skills and she is able to successfully complete multiple tasks with favourable results despite deadline pressure and she has got the result of library knowledge test 9 out of 15 marks. meimei MianDianRen Joined on Mon, Nov 6 2006 myanmar New Member 40 meemee Formal Letter, Writing, Careers

	farihasaleh  +  764766 Thu, 04 Jun 09 07:52 AM meimei MianDianRen “ Furthermore, Mary also has outstanding organizational skills and she is able to successfully complete multiple tasks with favourable results despite deadline pressure and she has got the result of library knowledge test 9 out of 15 marks. ” This piece of writing is quite correct. However, the second sentence is quite long and it could be easier to follow if it is broken down. You could write: Furthermore, Mary also has outstanding organizational skills and she is able to successfully complete multiple tasks with favourable results, despite deadline pressure the pressure of deadlines.Furthermore, she achieved 9 marks out of 15 in the library knowledge test . Hope this helps! Fariha. farihasaleh Joined on Mon, May 25 2009 Junior Member 72 Fariha Sentences

	meimei MianDianRen  +  764953 Thu, 04 Jun 09 10:43 AM Dear Fariha   Thank you very much for your kindness   salome meimei MianDianRen