exodejavu  +  615236 Fri, 19 Dec 08 05:06 PM Hi, I was helping someone to write his resume. 1) He was discharged from the military, had been a secondary lieutenant and had served as a Brigade Commander. How should I writing this occupation formally? Brigade Commander, Secondary Lieutenant, [Time], [Navy/army/air force], Taiwan Is this order proper? 2) He was the founder of a club. Incumbent President  of *** club The founder; successfully increasing the number of the members to more than 60. Is it okay? 3) Responsible for public relation, especially contacting the media. Responsible for public relation, especially connecting the media. Responsible for public relation, especially in contacting the media. Responsible for public relation, especially in connecting the media. Which one is proper? Best Wishes exodejavu Joined on Wed, Nov 5 2008 Taiwan Full Member 249 Zealous in mastering the English language Resume, Curriculum Vitae, Writing, Business, Qualifications, Resumes

	Clive  +  615284 Fri, 19 Dec 08 06:15 PM Hi, I was helping someone to write his resume. 1) He was discharged from the military, had been a secondary lieutenant and had served as a Brigade Commander. How should I writing this occupation formally? Brigade Commander, Secondary Lieutenant, [Time], [Navy/army/air force], Taiwan Is this order proper? Just put the name of his highest actual rank. eg Brigade Commander,  (Army). Then give the details of his experience in the army. In English, the phrase is 'Second Lieutenant', not 'secondary . .  '.) 2) He was the founder of a club. Incumbent President  of *** club The founder; successfully increasing the number of the members to more than 60. Is it okay? 3) Responsible for public relation, especially contacting the media. Responsible for public relation, especially connecting the media. Responsible for public relation, especially in contacting the media. Responsible for public relation, especially in connecting the media.   Which one is proper? I suggest  Responsible for public relations, especially media contact. Best wishes, Clive Clive Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004 Canada Veteran Member 29,663 El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo Resume, Curriculum Vitae, Writing, United Kingdom, Business, Countries, Great Britain, Qualifications, Languages, Resumes