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natybrazil  #546226  Fri, 25 Jul 08 01:28 PM
Hello!

What would be the best way to correct the following sentence?

"Lucy had her hair cut by an expensive beauty parlor downtown".

Suggestion: Lucy had an expensive beauty parlor downtonwn cut her hair. OK?

Thanks a lot!
  
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Delmobile  #546232  Fri, 25 Jul 08 01:37 PM
 Neither one is enormously wrong, although I would say "Lucy had her hair cut at an expensive beauty parlor downtown." It is the stylist, not the establishment itself, who actually cuts the hair, so your second sentence might more properly read, "Lucy had someone at an expensive beauty parlor downtown cut her hair," but I've heard this particular "synecdoche" often enough.
  
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natybrazil  #546233  Fri, 25 Jul 08 01:41 PM
I should have realized that I needed to use the prepo AT instead of BY.
Thanks.
  
New2grammar  #546261  Fri, 25 Jul 08 02:22 PM
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," but I've heard this particular "synecdoche" often enough.
Are you referring to the metonymy in the original question?
  
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Grammar Geek  #546265  Fri, 25 Jul 08 02:29 PM

A synechoche is a subset of metonymy, but the original poster was not using is at such - the orignal poster simply made an error with the preposition.

  
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New2grammar  #546267  Fri, 25 Jul 08 02:31 PM
Thanks, GG. If the poster had meant to use 'by' it would be a metonymy/synechoche right? I'm still tryin gto understand the meanings of the terms.
  
Grammar Geek  #546275  Fri, 25 Jul 08 02:44 PM

I can see they are difficult to learn. Most people who use them (and we do, every day, without realizing it) have no idea that there even are grammatical terms for what they just said.

Common ones are referring to a place/office to represent the person. "The White House said..." "The reaction from Downing Street was swift and severe."

But in reading about this just now, I found examples that I never even notice as being a figure of speech, like "a lot of new faces." Well, obviously, the rest of the person showed up too. How gross would it be if just the faces showed up! But that's another example of "one part representing the whole."

Wholegrain seems to be struggling with this too. You two should join forces.

 

 

  
New2grammar  #546277  Fri, 25 Jul 08 02:48 PM

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Well, obviously, the rest of the person showed up too. How gross would it be if just the faces showed up!
LOL...That's a good one.
  
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