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Radrook,
5 yr 114 days ago
The second poem is also very nice.
Great imagery.
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anita_a
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Thu, 12 Aug 04 01:59 AM
Hello Maj
Here's one from me for your solitude
To my lover far away,
what can I write to u
but about my missing
your sweet voice
your gentle touch
your encanting laughter
your lovely look
I miss everything
and every moment
That I spent with u
I'll never forget
the way u touched me
with your love
the way u kissed me
with passionate desire
the way u memesmerised me
with your sunny smile
Come back to me
oh my lover far away
I wish to feel you
to my heart's content
I wish to hide you
in the depth of my heart
I wish to see you
To wipe away
my tearful eyes.
Oh my lover far away
How far away
Are you from me now?
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Cheers,Anita
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lilbit,
5 yr 106 days ago
Beautiful work Anita. Sounds familiar ![Smile [:)]](/emoticons/emotion-1.gif)
maj,
5 yr 106 days ago
Thank you for this poem, Anita. It's so touching. So full of life.
vinodram,
5 yr 92 days ago
hi
the poem was too touching and
r u in any way so deep in the way to life?
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candle
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Sun, 29 Aug 04 09:27 AM
Your poem made me cry now. Very cruel poem ha..ha.. If I didn't read your poem it's better. The first time I see poem forum here, I may have to cry all forums if I start to read. Nowadays I am very much sensitive to read poem, before any poem never touch my heart.
Hope I can write one day.
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TheBob
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Sun, 29 Aug 04 08:45 PM
I agree with Pastel. When your soul aches, and you start to think about it, you keep thinking about it, and it wont stop untill you do something. This past week has been one of those kinds of weeks. I lost my best friend to College, and all the friends i had last year, my junior year, were seniors, and im a senior this year. I have never had a "best Friend" and when i got this friend he was a blessing. i would always go over to his house, and play games with him, and we had the same likes and dislikes, the same weaknesses, and everything, we were like the perfict, best friends. And when something like this, a friend goes to college or even dies. Its hard. So i decided to see if i could get more friends on the net again list i used to, and i started making friends on a server. Then all of a suddon one of the irc ops, and another person whom i thought whas a friend, started stabbing me in the back, and i couldnt take it anymore. Then when i started thinking about how i would probly never see my best friend that went out to college again, then its like my soul started acheing, and if i kept on thinking about it, my soul had an "echo" as pastel put it. It just kept ringing and ringing and ringing. Like it would never go away, and as soon as i started doing something elts, it kind of put an object in my head to stop the echoing, and it made it quite once again, but then every time i think about loosing my friend(s) my soul just aches, because to me, friends are everything, and to loose one is a huge loss for me. So i agree with pastel, that it IS like an echo that once you think of it it will be a reverberating effect untill you do something to distract the echo
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