http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpForMyEssay/lxplv/post.htmWed, 18 Nov 2009 20:32:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:992039Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpForMyEssay/lxplv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-992039.xmlHello everybody! i need a help for my english course, i wrote an essay but my teacher told me that's necessary to reformulate some sentences . so would you help me ! here is my essay. No one can deny the importance of having a personal career plan. It' s obvious that everyone starts his life with a plan which dries his future and determinates his career and his lifestyle. This career starts from college and extends until retirement. In this while we choose a specific domain that combines our motivation and ambitions, we also practice all what we had learnt in this stage, in order to open for us new opportunities and chances of employment , and discovering new atmosphere which is different to what we were habituated . As far...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnybodyCorrectEssay/lpdpk/post.htmFri, 20 Nov 2009 06:25:05 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:993558Lucus Ong1http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnybodyCorrectEssay/lpdpk/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-993558.xmlHi! Long Time No See! Finally graduating, I can now start writing dairies. I decided to write them before but I was stopped by busyness a few days after I started writing them.Ha!Ha! Could anybody correct them for me? Many thanks in advance. 19 NOV 2009 Thurs Making Chocolate fruit Today, I tried to make some chocolate fruit to sell so that I could earn some money. However, I was at lost to sell them. It’s because I only succeeded to make chocolate stick well and beautifully into grapes, among the four types of fruit I bought, honeydew, bananas, papayas and grapes. That made me lose a lot of money. However, I think it worth. It’s because I got a precious lesson from it-- I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/SuspiciousDivingSymptoms/lpggj/post.htmFri, 20 Nov 2009 21:15:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:994271Antonija0http://www.englishforums.com/English/SuspiciousDivingSymptoms/lpggj/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-994271.xmlIs the bolded part OK? Can you please check the whole sentence? Thank you. The uneventful dive, a CT scan of the head, and lack of any suspicious diving symptoms together will almost certainly exclude other disbaric injuries, such as decompression sickness and barotrauma of the lungs with cerebral arterial gas embolism as a possible cause.http://www.englishforums.com/English/OneParagraphPlease/lpggr/post.htmFri, 20 Nov 2009 21:11:18 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:994262Antonija0http://www.englishforums.com/English/OneParagraphPlease/lpggr/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-994262.xmlCan you please check this paragraph. Is the underlined part clear? Should I omitt the part in brackets? Thank you in advance Pneumocephalus is the presence of air or gas within the cranial cavity. It is usually associated with disruption of the skull: after a head and facial trauma, (in the cases of) tumors of the skull base, after neurosurgery or otorhinolaryngology, and rarely spontaneously (7). The clinical presentation usually varies and includes headache, seizures, double vision, weaknes, meningeal signs, ataxia, and a frontal lobe syndrome (7).http://www.englishforums.com/English/AbstractOfADissertation/lpgvh/post.htmFri, 20 Nov 2009 20:31:47 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:994235Encian0http://www.englishforums.com/English/AbstractOfADissertation/lpgvh/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-994235.xmlHi everyone! Could you please have a look at the English abstract of my dissertion and correct it where necessary. Thank you in advance for your time. My dissertation centres on the elaboration of the Marketing Plan of the commercial quarters of ’Company Name’ (henceforth Resort Centre) for 2010. The reason being, that in the present dubious world, which changes on a daily basis, it is of utmost importance to plan our activities consciously and deliberately. Through the examination of the steps of the marketing plan I aimed to draw a full and authentic picture of the activities of the Resort Centre, to reveal its weaknesses and defectivenesses, to determine its possibilities and barriers and also to...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectingParagragh/lpgrq/post.htmFri, 20 Nov 2009 19:22:05 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:994176sanaz_bch0http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectingParagragh/lpgrq/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-994176.xmlhey all, if it is possible for you. please help me to correctthis paragraph. thanks "In our society, responsibility for growing up children is one of the most important factors of making a healthy and steady community. As well as having a healthy society, having a good family has a great influence because family is a small part of community. This question that who are more responsible in having children, need to survey carefully. I believe fathers and mothers has the same duty on their children. "http://www.englishforums.com/English/Convesation/lpvwn/post.htmFri, 20 Nov 2009 10:25:29 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:993731Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/Convesation/lpvwn/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-993731.xmlI want to know about conversation between two strangers.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ReviewMotivationalLetter/lpvzb/post.htmFri, 20 Nov 2009 09:10:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:993668goutammotika0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ReviewMotivationalLetter/lpvzb/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-993668.xmlHello, I wrote a motivational letter for scholarship program in Europe. Can you please review it and tell me any modification needed. thank you Goutam “Research is to see what everybody else has seen, and to think what nobody else has thought” In today's fast paced world of technology, scientific breakthroughs are being made every day. Methods and equipment that were state-of-the-art no more than ten years ago are rapidly becoming obsolete. The result has been the transformation of conventional machines into more productively sophisticated machines, which are adaptable to distinctive and interdisciplinary approaches. Research in robotics and control systems has changed the way we interact with and perceive the world around...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HowWriteAcknowledgement/lpcbx/post.htmThu, 19 Nov 2009 17:12:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:993035Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/HowWriteAcknowledgement/lpcbx/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-993035.xmli would like to write an acknowledgement an my grade 4 project an "How Technology Helps Sense Organs"http://www.englishforums.com/English/CrimeFictionShortStory/gnhcn/post.htmWed, 21 Jan 2009 00:03:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:567065Anonymous6http://www.englishforums.com/English/CrimeFictionShortStory/gnhcn/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-567065.xmlNormal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 I wrote this for an english class (I'm in Year 7), my teacher liked it, I thought I'd post it here and see what people had to say about it :) Inspector Muggins leant back in his chair and took a long drag on his cigar, with the contented air of a man who is paid to do nothing but sit in an office and drink whisky and puff on cigars. Which is exactly what Muggins did. The town Muggins lived in was a quiet one, so there was rarely any need for him to get off his considerable bottom and lumber off to some crime scene. So it came as something of a surprise when the phone rang. So much of a surprise, in fact, that Muggins fell off his chair. The first thing that...http://www.englishforums.com/English/Engkish/lxqvm/post.htmThu, 19 Nov 2009 00:41:32 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:992217Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/Engkish/lxqvm/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-992217.xmlWritting an essay on:How an old term have taken on a new meaning. Can you give examples on some reasons on why old terms take on new meanings.http://www.englishforums.com/English/AnalyticalResearchPaper-Topic/lprgb/post.htmThu, 19 Nov 2009 07:22:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:992529Anonymous3http://www.englishforums.com/English/AnalyticalResearchPaper-Topic/lprgb/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-992529.xmlMy research paper has been rejected several times. I am majoring in Marketing and it has to be about Health Insurance this is the topic> Insurance mandated preoperative dietary counseling does not imporove outcome and increase drop out rates in patients considering gastric bypass surgery.http://www.englishforums.com/English/DefineRelatersValueWords-Examples/lxlvq/post.htmTue, 17 Nov 2009 17:15:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:990776Anonymous6http://www.englishforums.com/English/DefineRelatersValueWords-Examples/lxlvq/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-990776.xmlDefine ‘Time relaters' and ‘value words' with exampleshttp://www.englishforums.com/English/AboutSentanceFinanceNews/lpcrl/post.htmThu, 19 Nov 2009 16:50:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:993015cheukyatming2http://www.englishforums.com/English/AboutSentanceFinanceNews/lpcrl/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-993015.xml"F ive stocks fell for every one that rose on the New York Stock Exchange", where volume came to 226.6 million shares, compared with 245.3 million at the same time on Wednesday The quoted sentance I have read many times when I visit some finance website but I still dont know what is the meaning of "fell for every one that rose on..." Thank you for your kind reply.http://www.englishforums.com/English/Student/lpbqm/post.htmThu, 19 Nov 2009 16:21:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:992999Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/Student/lpbqm/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-992999.xmlEverybody can easily write and erase, capture the customer's eye with neon sign effects over 13 things and keep available in the rain.It is Sparkle Board of new LED neon board just as correct answer. LED neon board is being captured customer's eye, rain or snow. Protect the surface from scretches in detail with a clarity coating for special protected at the top grade acrylic of 5mm. Also it can be gave out light to produced letter and design. New waterproof Sparkle Board is born in 2009. The board was replaced an existing MDF frame by a plastic and changed internal structure. It can also solve the problem of the fever of LED, but its design is good.http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsaacNewtonFrenchRevolution/xhxx/post.htmWed, 21 Jan 2009 00:03:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:71057Chreal6http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsaacNewtonFrenchRevolution/xhxx/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-71057.xmlI need to write an essay on Isaac Newton's contribution to French revolution. Does anyone know Sir Isaac Newton's contribution to the French Revolution? I know Isaac Newton died before the French Revolution, but is it some law Newton made to help create some weapons or sort of things? Thanks!http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyFavouriteSportGameFootball/ccglw/post.htmWed, 20 May 2009 23:03:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:178797Wkiafu3http://www.englishforums.com/English/MyFavouriteSportGameFootball/ccglw/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-178797.xmlHi all i am new here. Was searching helps on essay and found this webby. nice one. My teacher just asked me to write an essay with the title . So far as i know, on this case, we are suppose to write about instead of , isnt it? My teacher has given me the notes which are all relating . below are the notes given from my teacher ------------------------------------ 1. intro - write about the game 2. what it is special about? - famous in world , world class team, have won many championship 3. who are the special/outstanding players in the team? 4. what are their special abilities - score alot goals, can run and driblle the ball ------------------------------------- I am just disagree with the way of writing this...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayImportanceManners/bwdwv/post.htmWed, 21 Jan 2009 00:03:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:123832Suthayil21http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayImportanceManners/bwdwv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-123832.xmlDear Friends, I am a six grader and have to give a 5 minute speech to my school audience on the importanc good manners. I have attached the speech that I intend to make. Kindly review the same and give your suggestions and improvements. Abel THE IMPORTANCE OF GOOD MANNERS chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />> > Manners, manners, manners…………Oh! We hear about them everyday, at home and at school. But have we ever sat back and thought about “The importance of good manners”. We children think that manners are boring, but we are learning something we will benefit from for the rest of our lives. > > We kids have a hard time remembering rules; rules at home, rules at school and rules when going out etc. My dear friends...http://www.englishforums.com/English/Takel/lprxq/post.htmThu, 19 Nov 2009 10:23:23 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:992680Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/Takel/lprxq/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-992680.xmli apply for scholarship and it require letter of motivation so in that case i like to write better letter of motivation.so please send sample letter of motivation.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTheseSentences/lkpdj/post.htmSun, 15 Nov 2009 14:54:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:972256SHD2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTheseSentences/lkpdj/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-972256.xmlPlease note that do not request the additional work / site assistance through the site assistant to us. 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Another thing I am wondering if I write any blog and I want proofreading of it before publishing it, can I do it on this forum or send it to you? Looking forward for your response. Thanks Shahzadhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/IsThisSentenceCorrect/lxlrr/post.htmTue, 17 Nov 2009 15:42:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:990692Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsThisSentenceCorrect/lxlrr/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-990692.xmlYour application has been processed and forward to the committee, for review.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMeDoMyEssay1/bndzm/post.htmSat, 21 Feb 2009 00:03:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:148354Anonymous11http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMeDoMyEssay1/bndzm/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-148354.xmlMy teacher asked me to write the essay about this topic>please help me do it: "what you believe you would gain from studying in Singapore and what you think you would find most challenging?http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayCorrections/lxqbr/post.htmWed, 18 Nov 2009 23:13:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:992154Jon780http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayCorrections/lxqbr/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-992154.xmlI was wondering if essay editing available? As people want to get attention from people, there are many ways. Some people make a tattoo on their body, build up their body, or make the body slim. When they’re dieting, some people choose a way to eat disorder and throw up what they eat. People get attention by an appearance mostly on the face or body that how much they are pretty or thin. People get obsessed with their weights when some fear that they won’t get any attention after they are not thin any more or some wants to diet but does not happen to be done easily. The idea where the eating disorder came from are getting common to people who desires so much to loose their weights. Rather than choosing...http://www.englishforums.com/English/AbstractOfADissertation/lxpzr/post.htmWed, 18 Nov 2009 18:26:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:991933Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/AbstractOfADissertation/lxpzr/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-991933.xmlHi everyone! Could you please have a look at the English abstract of my dissertion and correct it where necessary. Thank you in advance for your time. My dissertation centres on the elaboration of the Marketing Plan of the commercial quarters of ’Company Name’ (henceforth Resort Centre) for 2010. The reason being, that in the present dubious world, which changes on a daily basis, it is of utmost importance to plan our activities consciously and deliberately. Through the examination of the steps of the marketing plan I aimed to draw a full and authentic picture of the activities of the Resort Centre, to reveal its weaknesses and defectivenesses, to determine its possibilities and barriers and also to appoint a...