http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here. <font color=red>DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here. Post them in our <a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"><b>Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum</b></a>.</font>enXMOD (Build: 3614.32638)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCritiqueLetterAsking-SponsorshipAnimalChairty/bvdrj/post.htm#104100Tue, 24 Feb 2009 02:44:19 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:104100rwiles0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCritiqueLetterAsking-SponsorshipAnimalChairty/bvdrj/post.htm#104100http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-104100.xmlLooks fine, no problems.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCritiqueLetterAsking-SponsorshipAnimalChairty/bvdrj/post.htmTue, 24 Mar 2009 02:44:19 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:104049Guest1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCritiqueLetterAsking-SponsorshipAnimalChairty/bvdrj/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-104049.xmlDear Local Business, Please help the ***** find homes for *****’s down-and-out dogs and cats by sponsoring a shelter animal in the ***** Daily Liberal. Each month we will feature a page of animals in need of good homes and we are looking to secure financial support to run this program. The ***** is Australia's pre-eminent animal welfare organization and a non-government, not-for-profit, community based charity. We depend heavily on public donations. In the past 8 weeks alone over 260 animals have walked through the gates of the ***** ***** Shelter. With your business’ support we’d like to see 260 walk back out and into loving homes! By pledging your financial support your business will directly assist in rehoming local dogs...