http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here. <font color=red>DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here. Post them in our <a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"><b>Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum</b></a>.</font>enXMOD (Build: 3615.39139)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTranslationNeil-Young/bghvd/post.htm#115127Wed, 25 Mar 2009 07:14:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:115127SpoonfedBaby0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTranslationNeil-Young/bghvd/post.htm#115127http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-115127.xmlText revised according to the suggestions: It was the famous rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert around 9 pm . He interpreted his rock hymn to freedom , Rockin' In The Free World . This was Neil Young 's first show since he suffered an aneurism earlier this year. Thanks khoff and Mister Micawber for your corrections. Spoonfedbabyhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTranslationNeil-Young/bghvd/post.htm#115122Wed, 25 Mar 2009 07:14:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:115122Mister Micawber1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTranslationNeil-Young/bghvd/post.htm#115122http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-115122.xmlAnd in spite of the dictionary, I'd save 'legendary' for someone who has died or whose glory is definitely in the past, SFB.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTranslationNeil-Young/bghvd/post.htm#115113Sun, 25 Jan 2009 07:14:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:115113khoff2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTranslationNeil-Young/bghvd/post.htm#115113http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-115113.xmlIt was the legendary rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert around 9 pm . He interpreted his rock hymn to the freedom, Rockin' In The Free World . That was Neil Young first show since he was a victim of aneurism earlier this year. Here are my suggestions: It was the legendary rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert around 9 pm . He interpreted his rock hymn to freedom , Rockin' In The Free World . This was Neil Young 's first show since he suffered an aneurism earlier this year. I'm not sure about using the term "interpreted" - is it significant in the French? I would just say he performed his rock hymn to freedom (no "the" necessary here). Hope this helps.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTranslationNeil-Young/bghvd/post.htmWed, 25 Feb 2009 07:14:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:115093SpoonfedBaby3http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectTranslationNeil-Young/bghvd/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-115093.xmlHello I translated a short news article from French to English. Please, would you correct my translation? My translation:>> It was the legendary rock star Neil Young who ended the huge concert around 9 pm . He interpreted his rock hymn to the freedom, Rockin' In The Free World . That was Neil Young first show since he was a victim of aneurism earlier this year. Original version: C'est la légende du rock Neil Young qui a terminé le concert géant vers 21 heures. Il a interprété son hymne rock à la liberté, Rockin' In The Free World . Il s'agissait du premier spectacle de Neil Young depuis qu'il a été victime d'un anévrisme, plus tôt cette année. Thank you very much, ...