http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here. <font color=red>DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here. Post them in our <a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"><b>Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum</b></a>.</font>enXMOD (Build: 3614.32638)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCommentMyGrammar/bndpq/post.htm#148548Fri, 24 Apr 2009 13:45:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:148548Clive0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCommentMyGrammar/bndpq/post.htm#148548http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-148548.xmlHi, With reference to the facsimile (do you mean a 'fax'?) ABC, dated 1 Oct 2005, concerning the location of the control panels for the winch system, we would like to submit a proposal for the control panels' location at a column of level 5 (without more context, I'm not sure what you mean here about the location, but it doesn't sound good . Perhaps 'on a column on level 5'? ) for your comments and approval. Enclosed are drawings which show the proposed location of the control panels. As a general comment, I'd suggest you try to be more simple and direct in your choice of words and grammar. Best wishes, Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCommentMyGrammar/bndpq/post.htmSun, 24 May 2009 13:45:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:148528Ben91081http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCommentMyGrammar/bndpq/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-148528.xmlReferring to facsimile’s ABC dated 1 Oct 2005 concerning to the location of control panels for winch system, we would like to submit a proposal of the control panels location at a column of level 5 for your comment and approval. Enclose herein part plan drawings which are shown the proposed location of the control panels for your reference.