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&lt;font color=red&gt;DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here.  Post them in our &lt;a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/font&gt;</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>XMOD (Build: 3616.28671)</generator><item><title>Re: Comma or Hyphen?  Please advise.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm#446923</link><pubDate>Mon, 27 Apr 2009 07:17:57 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:446923</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm#446923</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-446923.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Ah. What a lovely thought, isn't it? Thanks for clarifying.</description></item><item><title>Re: Comma or Hyphen?  Please advise.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm#446920</link><pubDate>Fri, 27 Feb 2009 08:17:57 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:446920</guid><dc:creator>Hoa Thai</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm#446920</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-446920.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi Grammar Geek, I asked the same question as you did, and found this introduction to a computer game called Haze:  "Twenty-five years in the future. Governments have outsourced military
operations to private multinational corporations. As Jake Carpenter, a
newly enlisted soldier in the Mantel army, you are seeking fulfillment
and thrills by fighting for a good cause.
 
 Thanks to their high-tech arsenal of vehicles, deadly weaponry, and
performance enhancing bio-medical support, the Mantel Corporation's
ruthlessly efficient soldiers are the most feared by terrorists,
dictators, and the corporation's political enemies." Hoa Thai</description></item><item><title>Re: Comma or Hyphen?  Please advise.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm#446913</link><pubDate>Tue, 27 Jan 2009 08:17:57 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:446913</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm#446913</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-446913.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Just a side note, with nothing to do with the commas: ...and giving it to its soldiers. 
 Most corporations do not have soldiers, so this pronoun leaves me wondering who or what the soldiers do belong to. Of course, if this is science fiction, then perhaps the corporation does have soldiers.</description></item><item><title>Re: Comma or Hyphen?  Please advise.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm#446905</link><pubDate>Wed, 27 May 2009 07:17:57 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:446905</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><slash:comments>3</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm#446905</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-446905.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi, 
 Which sentence is grammatically correct? Do I have a comma or hyphen after the corporation name? Or do I write it a different way? Thanks for your help.  The corporation you work for - Mantel, is manufacturing a secret drug called Nectar and giving it to its soldiers. 
 The corporation you work for - Mantel - is manufacturing a secret drug called Nectar and giving it to its soldiers. 
 The corporation you work for ,  Mantel, is manufacturing a secret drug called Nectar and giving it to its soldiers.  Needs the second comma 
 The corporation you work for - Mantel - is manufacturing a secret drug called Nectar and giving it to its soldiers.  OK 
 Clive</description></item><item><title>Comma or Hyphen?  Please advise.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 27 Jan 2009 08:17:57 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:446855</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>4</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CommaOrHyphenPleaseAdvise/zzqdk/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-446855.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi there, Which sentence is grammatically correct? Do I have a comma or hyphen after the corporation name? Or do I write it a different way? Thanks for your help.   The corporation you work for - Mantel, is manufacturing a secret drug called Nectar and giving it to its soldiers.   The corporation you work for - Mantel - is manufacturing a secret drug called Nectar and giving it to its soldiers.</description></item></channel></rss>