Re: Kindly explain!!!

Clive — Sat, 09 Feb 2008 05:10:07 GMT

Hi,

1. Kindly tell if any grammar errors in the following:

Oritel East & Oritel West are one of the finest hotels in Mumbai. (or at Mumbai)

Oritel East and Oritel West are two of the finest hotels in Mumbai.

Oritel East & Oritel West are the finest hotels in Mumbai.

Oritel East and Oritel West are the finest hotels in Mumbai.

The Taj is the finest hotel in Mumbai

The Taj is the finest hotel in Mumbai.

2. Oritel East & Oritel West have the most scenic locale & pricturesque surrounding (or surroundings). Please explain why

'Surroundings'. Because the plural form is more idiomatic, and also because each hotel is presumably in a different place.

3. Its five star ambience & economic pricing offers you all that you desire (according to me it sould be offer you Yes)

4. Banquet rooms perfect for business meetings, training, weddings, workshops or gatherings

Say 'training' or preferably, with these other plurals, say 'training sessions'.

should it be training or trainings i took it from an article and according to me its grammartical error correct me if i m wrong.

Secondly is it ok if i wrte without 's', Banquet rooms perfect for business meeting, training, wedding, workshop or gathering Plural sounds better. If you want to use singular, you need to use indefinite articles (eg a business meeting, a wedding, etc.)

In good writing, avoid using ampersands (ie no & signs).

Best wishes, Clive

Kindly explain!!!

Anonymous — Sat, 09 Feb 2008 04:20:10 GMT