http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectResumeAgain/grhld/post.htm#503339Mon, 21 Apr 2008 12:17:01 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:503339Clive0http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectResumeAgain/grhld/post.htm#503339http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-503339.xml<p>Hi,</p> <p>You normally <em><u>receive</u></em> an award. Or you could say<u> <em>gain.</em></u></p> <p>Clive</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectResumeAgain/grhzv/post.htm#503238Mon, 21 Apr 2008 06:33:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:503238Prawit-_-1http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectResumeAgain/grhzv/post.htm#503238http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-503238.xml<p>Thank you for your suggestion. </p> <p>Can I write &quot;<font color="#000000">Assisted in safety activities<strong> <font color="#0000ff">to achieve</font> </strong>the Award for TPM Excellence.&quot;?</font></p> <p>I would like to show recruitment managers that my company got the award and I involved in safety activies.</p> <p>Regards,</p> <p>Prawit</p> <p>&nbsp;</p> <p>&nbsp;</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectResumeAgain/grhbx/post.htm#503180Mon, 21 Apr 2008 02:12:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:503180Clive2http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectResumeAgain/grhbx/post.htm#503180http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-503180.xml<p>Hi,</p> <p><font color="#0000ff">Please correct the sentence in work experience section of my resume as below.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></p> <ul> <li><font color="#0000ff">Assisted in safety pillar activities<strong> and received</strong> the Award for TPM Excellence.</font></li></ul> <p>I don&#39;t know waht a &#39;safety pillar&#39; is. Are you sure this is the correct term?</p> <p><font color="#000000">Best wishes, Clive</font></p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectResumeAgain/grhbm/post.htmMon, 21 Apr 2008 02:01:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:503178Prawit-_-3http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectResumeAgain/grhbm/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-503178.xml<p>Please correct the sentence in work experience section of my resume as below.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </p> <ul> <li>Assisted in safety pillar activities to receive the Award for TPM Excellence.</li></ul> <p>&nbsp;</p> <p>Thank you.</p> <p>Prawit</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>