http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3125.9045)http://www.englishforums.com/English/TakeAway/gcclq/post.htm#511733Fri, 09 May 2008 17:27:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:511733Huevos0http://www.englishforums.com/English/TakeAway/gcclq/post.htm#511733http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-511733.xml&nbsp;I wouldn&#39;t use <i>away</i> there.</p><p>Also the sentences don&#39;t flow well together. I can&#39;t help you further without context, i.e. were the thieves at the same location as John? And was John driving his father&#39;s car? Etc?&nbsp;<div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/TakeAway/gccjg/post.htmFri, 09 May 2008 15:29:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:511689Vincent Teo0http://www.englishforums.com/English/TakeAway/gccjg/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-511689.xml<p>Can I say,</p> <p>One sunny day, John was on his way back to home. There were two men who were&nbsp;going to steal the car. They wanted to take away John&#39;s father&#39;s new car. </p><div style="clear:both;"></div>