ESL General English Grammar Questions

Re: correction 2

New2grammar — Sun, 18 May 2008 16:27:29 GMT

Thanks, MM.

Re: correction 2

Mister Micawber — Sun, 18 May 2008 11:53:51 GMT

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Pretty good! Don't change persons without good reason:

It never fails to amuse me to watch my dog work for treats. His droopy eyes, slobbering mouth, and the look that says 'please give me a treat' always cheer me up when I'm down. Unfortunately, he's obedient mostly when he knows he'll be given treats. The moment I'm out of treats, I'm no longer his favorite; I get not even an ounce of his attention unless he's downright bored.That's my fickle dog.

correction 2

New2grammar — Sun, 18 May 2008 11:08:56 GMT

It never fails to amuse me to watch my dog work for treats. His droopy eyes, slobbering mouth and the look that says 'please give me a treat' always cheer me up when I'm down. Unfortunately, he's mostly obedient when he knows he'll be given treats. The moment you're out of treats, you are no longer his favorite, not even an ounce of his attention unless he's downright bored.That's my cheap dog.

Please correct any mistakes.

Thanks in advance!