http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3273.32735)http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyCheckMyParaOnHockey/gcqbv/post.htm#515597Mon, 19 May 2008 12:23:07 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:515597Creativeguru0http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyCheckMyParaOnHockey/gcqbv/post.htm#515597http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-515597.xml<p>My did my best to rectify the errors:</p><span style="COLOR:black;">India</span><span style="COLOR:black;"> didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed<strong><span>,</span></strong> India won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented India at Azlan Shah Hockey <strong><span>T</span></strong>ournament and being in the final is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have <u>– </u>excitement, energetic, enthusiastic&nbsp; and keenly fought contest. The players had given there 100%, Argentina was lucky to get a golden goal in an extra time. Three cheers for the Indian <strong><span>h</span></strong>ockey team.</span><span style="COLOR:black;"></span><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyCheckMyParaOnHockey/gcqrq/post.htm#515592Mon, 19 May 2008 12:13:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:515592Mister Micawber1http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyCheckMyParaOnHockey/gcqrq/post.htm#515592http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-515592.xml.<br /><em>I have underlined some problems:</em><br /><br /><span style="color:black;">India</span><span style="color:black;"> didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed<strong>,</strong> India won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented India <span style="text-decoration:underline;">in Azlan</span> Shah Hockey <strong>T</strong>ournament and being <span style="text-decoration:underline;">in final</span> is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have <span style="text-decoration:underline;">– exciting</span>, energetic, enthusiastic&nbsp; and keenly fought contest. <span style="text-decoration:underline;">Players</span> gave<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> their</span> 100%, Argentina was lucky to get a golden goal in <span style="text-decoration:underline;">the extra</span> time.<span style="text-decoration:underline;"> Anyways</span> three cheers f<span style="text-decoration:underline;">or Indian</span> <strong>h</strong>ockey team.</span><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyCheckMyParaOnHockey/gcpwc/post.htmMon, 19 May 2008 04:37:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:515425Creativeguru2http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyCheckMyParaOnHockey/gcpwc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-515425.xml<span style="COLOR:black;">India</span><span style="COLOR:black;"> didn’t lose yesterday. Indeed India won the Silver Medal with pride. It was the junior team who represented India in Azlan Shah Hockey tournament and being in final is itself a great achievement for the team. The final had all the components which a final should have – exciting, energetic, enthusiastic&nbsp; and keenly fought contest. Players gave their 100%, Argentina was lucky to get a golden goal in the extra time. Anyways three cheers for Indian Hockey team. </span><div style="clear:both;"></div>