ESL General English Grammar Questions

Re: Love letter from teeth to toothbrush

Creativeguru — Thu, 29 May 2008 17:02:58 GMT

It's so kind of you thanks a lot

Re: Love letter from teeth to toothbrush

optilang — Thu, 29 May 2008 16:28:21 GMT

optilang
It gives me a nice/warm feeling to know that someone care for me so much.

It gives me a nice/warm feeling to know that someone cares for me so much.

Sorry just noticed the mistake. I was on the train when I wrote it.

Re: Love letter from teeth to toothbrush

Creativeguru — Thu, 29 May 2008 15:47:43 GMT

Thanks optilang

Re: Love letter from teeth to toothbrush

optilang — Thu, 29 May 2008 14:26:27 GMT

I can't wait for that time of the day when you come and hold me close, throwing yourself upon me. When you (gently) caress my whole body, it makes me gleam (with delight). You, indeed, are the one who can reach into my most inner dark places. It gives me a nice/warm feeling to know that someone care for me so much. Missing you so much, honey!

Promise you'll never give me the brush-off

Ms Teeth

Love letter from teeth to toothbrush

Creativeguru — Thu, 29 May 2008 09:20:02 GMT

Dearest Colgate Toothbrush,

I always wait for that time of the Day when you come and hold me close, throw yourself upon me. When you caress all over my body, it brighten me up. Indeed you are only who can reach deep inside and make me happy. It makes me feel so nice that someone cares for me so much.
Missing you so much honey!
Never leave me I am yours forever

Lots of love
Ms Teeth

For better understanding I am explaning each sentence in details:

I always wait for that time of the Day when you come and hold me close, throw yourself upon me.(the morning or night at the time we brush our teeth )
When you caress all over my body, it brighten me up. (brushing the teeth from all sides)
Indeed you are only who can reach deep inside and make me happy. (reaching till the root of the teeth)

Kinldy check my letter for grammar errors if any. And if you can add up anything to make it more interesting, Its my creative writing assignment.

Thanks in advance!