ESL General English Grammar Questions

Re: Edit the sentence please

Marius Hancu — Tue, 03 Jun 2008 12:59:33 GMT

Perhaps:

I like Clinton, who has told us the good story of a common boy growing up to be the President of the United States, yet he remains the image of being an ordinary citizen.

Re: Edit the sentence please

NL888 — Tue, 03 Jun 2008 12:33:55 GMT

It is understandable that you dislike such kind of eulogizing.

I edit the sentence like this:

I like Clinton, who has told us a good story from a common boy growing up to be the President of the United States, yet he remains the image of being an ordinary citizen.

Do you agree with me, Marius Hancu?

Re: Edit the sentence please

Marius Hancu — Tue, 03 Jun 2008 09:47:00 GMT

has told us a miracle

where did you get this from?

search Google Books for such critical patters before posting

Edit the sentence please

NL888 — Tue, 03 Jun 2008 09:08:49 GMT

Edit it please:

I like Clinton, who has told us a miracle from a common boy to the President of the United States, yet he remains the image of being an ordinary citizen.