http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3273.32735)http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwkw/post.htm#523268Thu, 05 Jun 2008 07:45:25 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:523268Creativeguru0http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwkw/post.htm#523268http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-523268.xml<p>Thank you sir</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwkg/post.htm#523266Thu, 05 Jun 2008 07:43:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:523266Mister Micawber1http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwkg/post.htm#523266http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-523266.xml.<br />I&#39;ll stick with my original paraphrase.<br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwjm/post.htm#523255Thu, 05 Jun 2008 07:02:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:523255Creativeguru2http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwjm/post.htm#523255http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-523255.xml<p style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><font><em><span>for better understanding I am posting whole paragraph here :</span></em></font></p> <p style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><font><em><span></span></em></font>&nbsp;</p><font><em><span>Disney</span></em><em><span>, the creator of magic world wide and </span></em><em><span>Popley,</span></em><em><span> </span></em><span>the leading <span>house</span> of elegant and stylish <span>jewellery</span><em><span> </span></em>are delighted, to announce the launch of ‘Disney Fine Jewellery’ in India and the Middle East. This is an exclusive invitation to our loyal customers for this special launch event.<em><span></span></em></span></font><em><span><font>&nbsp;</font></span></em> <p style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><font><em><span><strong>We have the limited edition of 88 pieces only, so be the one to own it before it vanishes.</strong></span></em><span> Come and seize the opportunity to own a legacy of exceptional craftsmanship, <i>a</i><em><span> marvelous creation that will make your eyes&nbsp;sparkle like diamonds.</span></em><em><span> </span></em></span></font></p> <p style="TEXT-ALIGN:justify;"><font><span><em><span></span></em></span></font>&nbsp;</p><font><span><em><span>The line&nbsp;sentence in discusion is&nbsp;the bold one .&nbsp;</span></em></span></font> <p>&nbsp;</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwjj/post.htm#523252Thu, 05 Jun 2008 06:53:17 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:523252Mister Micawber3http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwjj/post.htm#523252http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-523252.xml.<br /><strong>??</strong><br /><br /><em><font><strong>This is a</strong> limited edition of <strong>88.&nbsp; Own one before they sell out.</strong></font></em><br /><br /><strong>??</strong><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwjw/post.htmThu, 05 Jun 2008 06:48:34 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:523251Creativeguru4http://www.englishforums.com/English/KindlyHelpMe/gvwjw/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-523251.xml<p><em><font>We have the limited edition of 88 pieces only, so be the one to own it before it vanishes.</font></em></p> <p><strong><em><font>Is there any better way to write it in more sophisticated language?</font></em></strong></p><div style="clear:both;"></div>