http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3273.32735)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzcdp/post.htm#526335Thu, 12 Jun 2008 13:22:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:526335Marius Hancu0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzcdp/post.htm#526335http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-526335.xml&nbsp;<font><b>Exclusively for you</b>,</font></p><p><font><b><span>the opportunity </span></b><span style="color:black;"><font><b>of being </b>an owner of</font></span></font></p><p>&nbsp;<span style="color:black;">before someone else <b>gets/buys</b> it</span><font><b><span></span></b></font><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzcdw/post.htm#526328Thu, 12 Jun 2008 13:11:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:526328Creativeguru1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzcdw/post.htm#526328http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-526328.xml<p>I just re wrote it please correct the following:</p><font>Exclusively only for you, the limited edition of Mickey Mouse Diamond Pendant, only 88 pieces manufactured worldwide.</font><span style="COLOR:black;"> Grab this exceptional piece before someone else owns it.</span><font><font> </font><span>Come and seize the opportunity </span><span style="COLOR:black;"><font>be an owner of a marvelous creation that will be the envy of all. </font></span></font><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzccb/post.htm#526304Thu, 12 Jun 2008 12:37:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:526304Creativeguru2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzccb/post.htm#526304http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-526304.xml<p>thats true but it does not fit here can you suggest anything new</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzcbq/post.htm#526302Thu, 12 Jun 2008 12:33:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:526302New2grammar3http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzcbq/post.htm#526302http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-526302.xml<p>I&#39;ve heard of &quot; X waits for nobody&quot;. Will that do the trick?</p> <p>Sexy girl: This sexy body waits for nobody!</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzcbn/post.htmThu, 12 Jun 2008 12:29:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:526299Creativeguru4http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMe/gzcbn/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-526299.xml<p><span>Exclusively only for you, the limited edition of *** Mickey Mouse Diamond Pendant, only 88 pieces manufactured worldwide.</span><span style="COLOR:black;"> Grab this exceptional piece of craftsmanship before someone else owns it.</span><span> </span><span>Come and seize the opportunity be an owner of a marvelous creation that will be the envy of all. </span></p> <p><span>&nbsp;Kinldy help me to write it in more sophisticated language, specially line - <font>Grab this exceptional piece of craftsmanship before someone else owns it.</font></span></p><div style="clear:both;"></div>