ESL General English Grammar Questions

Re: Specially for women..Kindly help

optilang — Wed, 18 Jun 2008 12:37:23 GMT

For the woman who wants to look stylish ..........................................

Re: Specially for women..Kindly help

Feebs11 — Wed, 18 Jun 2008 12:30:14 GMT

You have to be very careful to avoid sounding patronising to women:

We offer an exclusive preview of our latest Limited Edition to our patrons.

For any woman whose look is stylish, "Disney Fine Jewelry" is the obvious choice - works of art created by master craftsmen.

Re: Specially for women..Kindly help

Creativeguru — Wed, 18 Jun 2008 09:52:37 GMT

First line I modified to

We are pleased to offer our patrons specially for woman, an exclusive preview of our Limited Edition

Second line i modified to

'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, especially for those fashion-conscious women who desire to look more stylish and classy

Specially for women..Kindly help

Creativeguru — Wed, 18 Jun 2008 08:26:15 GMT

We are pleased to offer our patrons an exclusive preview of our Limited Edition.

'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, especially for the woman of today.

I want to tell it's for women specially so how can we rephrase the above sentences? In second sentence rather than wqoman of today i want it for design concious or fashion concious something on that lines
Kinldy help me