http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3232.18851)http://www.englishforums.com/English/Goal/ghlvm/post.htm#538776Wed, 09 Jul 2008 15:12:41 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:538776New2grammar0http://www.englishforums.com/English/Goal/ghlvm/post.htm#538776http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-538776.xmlAny suggestions for improvements?<div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Goal/ghlvw/post.htm#538772Wed, 09 Jul 2008 15:05:17 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:538772Avangi1http://www.englishforums.com/English/Goal/ghlvw/post.htm#538772http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-538772.xmlIt&#39;s clearly understandable, but lacks elegance.<div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Goal/ghldh/post.htmWed, 09 Jul 2008 13:43:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:538754New2grammar2http://www.englishforums.com/English/Goal/ghldh/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-538754.xmlWe must not focus on achieving the final goal in one big step. Instead, we should strive to achieve smaller goals leading to the end goal. <br /><br />Is the above understandable?<br />Thanks.<div style="clear:both;"></div>