ESL General English Grammar Questions

Re: Comment my english

Doll — Fri, 08 Aug 2008 10:52:06 GMT

Yes, I can correct them but I want you to correct them. At least, try please.

Re: Comment my english

minil — Fri, 08 Aug 2008 03:11:48 GMT

Can u correct the mistakes.

Re: Comment my english

Doll — Thu, 07 Aug 2008 19:31:10 GMT

minil
My todays morning sleep was distrubed by ironing man, who pressed our calling bell. I gave washed clothes for ironing and went to the bed again, i was again woked up by cooking woman at 8 am. Actually i was told by my onsite counter part previous day to come office around 9:00 Am today.It will take atleast half hour to reach office and it was already 8:15 after doing my morning duties. after i had my breakfast, i started from home at 8:45 and i reached office at 9:30 AM. my onsite counterpart was expecting for my call at 9:00, so he was angry at me. Some how i convinced him and started testing the applicaiton at 10:00 AM our Citrix client was down, so i could not proceed the work. Citrix connection was not available till evenining, so we at offshore were no idea what to do and we left for the day at 5:00. without doing any usefull work today..

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Comment my english

minil — Thu, 07 Aug 2008 16:47:02 GMT

My todays morning sleep was distrubed by ironing man, who pressed our calling bell. I gave washed clothes for ironing and went to the bed again, i was again woked up by cooking woman at 8 am. Actually i was told by my onsite counter part previous day to come office around 9:00 Am today.It will take atleast half hour to reach office and it was already 8:15 after doing my morning duties. after i had my breakfast, i started from home at 8:45 and i reached office at 9:30 AM. my onsite counterpart was expecting for my call at 9:00, so he was angry at me. Some how i convinced him and started testing the applicaiton at 10:00 AM our Citrix client was down, so i could not proceed the work. Citrix connection was not available till evenining, so we at offshore were no idea what to do and we left for the day at 5:00. without doing any usefull work today..