http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here. <font color=red>DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here. Post them in our <a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"><b>Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum</b></a>.</font>enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckGrammar/gkhlv/post.htm#552496Fri, 23 Jan 2009 15:31:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:552496Clive0http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckGrammar/gkhlv/post.htm#552496http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-552496.xmlHi, Many women would dare to quit smoking unless they weren&#39;t afraid of putting on unwanted weight. To what extent are these fears true and how to keep the weight off? Many women would try to quit smoking except that they are afraid of putting on unwanted weight. To what extent are these fears true, and how can they keep the weight off? &#39;Dare&#39; is not a good word to choose. Quitting smoking is not something that sounds like it requires bravery/courage. Best wishes, Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckGrammar/gkhlv/post.htmMon, 23 Feb 2009 15:31:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:552470changeling1http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCheckGrammar/gkhlv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-552470.xmlHi everybody Could you, please, check my grammar and vocabulary in the following sentences? I appreciate your help Many women would dare to quit smoking unless they weren&#39;t afraid of putting on unwanted weight. To what extent are these fears true and how to keep the weight off? Thanks in advance