http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here. <font color=red>DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here. Post them in our <a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"><b>Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum</b></a>.</font>enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionIfNeeded/glvnz/post.htm#556738Thu, 26 Mar 2009 15:12:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:556738smk830http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionIfNeeded/glvnz/post.htm#556738http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-556738.xmlthkxhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionIfNeeded/glvnz/post.htm#556677Sun, 26 Apr 2009 14:12:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:556677Clive1http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionIfNeeded/glvnz/post.htm#556677http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-556677.xmlHi, Yup we enjoyed the show :) everything was spectacular specially the graphics they were using on stage and also the dresses.She performed really well ,her fat belly was shaking when she was dancing she needs to get in shape . Yup, we enjoyed the show. :) Everything was spectacular, especially the graphics they were using on stage and also the dresses. She performed really well. Her fat belly was shaking when (while) she was dancing, so she needs to get in shape. Best wishes, Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionIfNeeded/glvnz/post.htmSun, 26 Apr 2009 14:12:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:556551Anonymous2http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionIfNeeded/glvnz/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-556551.xmlYup we enjoyed the show :) everything was spectacular specially the graphics they were using on stage and also the dresses.She performed really well ,her fat belly was shaking when she was dancing she needs to get in shape .