http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3273.32735)http://www.englishforums.com/English/LookingConstructSentenceWithout-HavingCollapseItself/glzhk/post.htm#556743Wed, 20 Aug 2008 03:24:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:556743Grammar Geek0http://www.englishforums.com/English/LookingConstructSentenceWithout-HavingCollapseItself/glzhk/post.htm#556743http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-556743.xml<p>Change the semi-colon into a colon.</p> <p>(I was assuming the -Relon, to her enemies. is explanatory for us. If it&#39;s not, but the rest in quotes, change the . to , and say something like &quot;Relon declared to her enemies.&quot;</p><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/LookingConstructSentenceWithout-HavingCollapseItself/glzhc/post.htmWed, 20 Aug 2008 02:50:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:556735Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/LookingConstructSentenceWithout-HavingCollapseItself/glzhc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-556735.xmlNo matter who charges first, the end result is certain; my pike will pierce your heart. -Relon, to her enemies.<br /><br />This is the sentence, but it does not seem to flow grammatically. I don&#39;t know if it is a misplaced comma or the semi-colon. This is a sentence that is meant to be read, so that does matter quite a bit. Any help is appreciated.<div style="clear:both;"></div>