http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3273.32735)http://www.englishforums.com/English/SentenceStructureHelp/gmwqw/post.htm#562674Fri, 05 Sep 2008 03:44:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:562674Clive0http://www.englishforums.com/English/SentenceStructureHelp/gmwqw/post.htm#562674http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-562674.xmlHi,<br />I <span style="COLOR:#0000bf;">was needing some help with this sentence:<br /><br />Another of his well used poetic devices is alliteration, describing the outcome of the storm, becoming, “smooth and streamlined.” <br /><br />I don&#39;t know whether or not I need all of the commas or if there is another symbol I need to add to the sentence in place of a comma.<br /><br /><span style="COLOR:#111111;">I&#39;d make a few changes to how this is written, as follows.<br /><strong>Another of his well<span style="COLOR:#c00000;">-</span>used poetic devices is alliteration, describing the outcome of the storm <span style="COLOR:#c00000;">as</span> “smooth and streamlined.” <br /></strong><br />Best wishes, Clive.</span></span><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SentenceStructureHelp/gmwnj/post.htmFri, 05 Sep 2008 00:03:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:562624Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/SentenceStructureHelp/gmwnj/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-562624.xmlI was needing some help with this sentence:<br /><br />Another of his well used poetic devices is alliteration, describing the outcome of the storm, becoming, “smooth and streamlined.” <br /><br />I don&#39;t know whether or not I need all of the commas or if there is another symbol I need to add to the sentence in place of a comma.<br /><br />Thanks for your time.<div style="clear:both;"></div>