http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here. <font color=red>DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here. Post them in our <a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"><b>Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum</b></a>.</font>enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity/gxmwd/post.htm#574918Mon, 23 Mar 2009 10:32:37 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:574918madona0http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity/gxmwd/post.htm#574918http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-574918.xmlThank you very much Caris for your corrections. I truly appreciate your useful help. Thank you again. Yes, it is a university in the USA. I am going to correct again my motivation letter in order to avoid some repetition. Good luck to you in every aspect in your life!http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity/gxmwd/post.htm#573854Fri, 23 Jan 2009 10:32:37 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:573854caris1http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity/gxmwd/post.htm#573854http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-573854.xmlI&#39;ve put the corrections in bold. Dear Madam or Sir, The process of supply and demand is on-going and, as such , requires organizations to both adapt and innovate. Organizations should meet the challenge of modern technology and, at times, challenge it themselves. They must also be able to take advantage of opportunities in order to create or maintain a good position in the financial market. In short, the banks and big corporations need high quality ( word deleted ) financial service where the focus is on the internal and external stock market environment. I have a passion to work with financial transactions, stock market s and investment funds. Therefore, I would like to apply for the Bachelor&#39;s degree of Administrative studies,...http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity/gxmwd/post.htmSat, 23 May 2009 09:32:37 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:573515madona2http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterUniversity/gxmwd/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-573515.xmlHi everybody, I found this forum few days ago. I think, it is so helpful and valuable for everyone. I try to get through into Y.. University. I need your help to check my motivation letter such as grammar, structure, errors and etc. I really appreciate your comment, ideas and opinions. My due date for sending my application form, resume and motivation letter is October 15,2008 . Please help me.Thank you very much in advance to everybody who wants to &quot;give me a hand&quot;. Dear Madam or Sir, The process of supply and demand is on-going and, as such requires organizations to both adapt and innovate. Organizations should meet the challenge of modern technology and, at times, challenge it themselves. They must also be able to...