http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeneralEnglishGrammarQuestions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enCSMOD (Build: 3273.32735)http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldYouCheckMyEnglish/gpgnv/post.htm#576780Wed, 15 Oct 2008 23:16:51 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:576780RayH0http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldYouCheckMyEnglish/gpgnv/post.htm#576780http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-576780.xmlNo. 1<br /><br />M: Do you have change for a dollar? <p>F: Sorry, no, I don&#39;t. What do you need it for?&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <span style="color:#0000ff;">I don&#39;t have a problem with &quot;Sorry, no, I don&#39;t&quot; but normally you would use just one of them.</span></p> <p>M:<strike> </strike>I <strike>thought I</strike> need<span style="color:#ff0000;"></span> some change for the bus.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <span style="color:#0000ff;">I&#39;m not sure why you say &quot;thought&quot; here. I implies that you did need change but that you now realize that you don&#39;t need change.</span> <span style="color:#0000ff;">I would leave it out.</span></p> F: Then don&#39;t worry. You can break it <strike>in</strike> <span style="color:#ff0000;">on</span> the bus.<br /><br />No. 2&nbsp; At the cafe ( M is a waiter.)<br /><br />M: Good morning. Would you like the usual? <p>F: Oh, what a surprise! Do you remember what I want?</p> M: Of course. You love the double-decker, don&#39;t you?<br /><span style="color:#0000ff;">Number two looks good.</span><br /><div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldYouCheckMyEnglish/gpgmd/post.htm#576762Wed, 15 Oct 2008 21:35:55 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:576762Goodman1http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldYouCheckMyEnglish/gpgmd/post.htm#576762http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-576762.xml<BLOCKQUOTE><div><img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"> <strong>Kenta</strong></div><div>Hello. I make it a rule to write a dialogue in English everyday to improve my English.<br />Will you check them?<br /><br />No. 1<br /><br />M: Do you have change for a dollar? <p></p> <p>F: Sorry, <span style="COLOR:#ff00ff;"><strike>no</strike>,</span> I don&#39;t. What do you need it for?</p> <p>M: I thought I need some change for the bus.</p> <p>F: Then don&#39;t worry. You can break it <span style="COLOR:#0080ff;">on</span> &nbsp;<strike>in</strike> the bus.<br /><br />No. 2&nbsp; At the cafe ( M is a waiter.)<br /><br />M: Good morning. Would you like the usual?</p> <p>F: Oh, what a surprise! Do you remember what I want?</p> <p>M: Of course. You love the double-decker, don&#39;t you?<br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <div></div></div></BLOCKQUOTE><br /><br />Looked good! just a couple of minor changes...<div style="clear:both;"></div>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldYouCheckMyEnglish/gpglq/post.htmWed, 15 Oct 2008 21:26:00 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:576758Kenta2http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldYouCheckMyEnglish/gpglq/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-576758.xmlHello. I make it a rule to write a dialogue in English everyday to improve my English.<br />Will you check them?<br /><br />No. 1<br /><br />M: Do you have change for a dollar?</p> <p>F: Sorry, no, I don&#39;t. What do you need it for?</p> <p>M: I thought I need some change for the bus.</p> <p>F: Then don&#39;t worry. You can break it in the bus.<br /><br />No. 2&nbsp; At the cafe ( M is a waiter.)<br /><br />M: Good morning. Would you like the usual?</p> <p>F: Oh, what a surprise! Do you remember what I want?</p> <p>M: Of course. You love the double-decker, don&#39;t you?<br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<div style="clear:both;"></div>