http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here.enXMOD (Build: 3598.39794)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlsPersonalStatementApplyingFinance-Economics/hdchm/post.htm#602058Sun, 08 Mar 2009 20:46:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:602058zoechoong0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlsPersonalStatementApplyingFinance-Economics/hdchm/post.htm#602058http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-602058.xmlDear Anonymous, Thanks for reading my personal statement, but i would like to ask what do you mean by "what can i do for economics"? because i not really understand how to elaborate on this. thanks for commenthttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PlsPersonalStatementApplyingFinance-Economics/hdchm/post.htm#601405Sun, 08 Feb 2009 20:46:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:601405Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlsPersonalStatementApplyingFinance-Economics/hdchm/post.htm#601405http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-601405.xmlYou spoke a lot about what economics can do for you but not what you can do for economics. Also we are in a financial crisis and economic turmoil which i is not mentioned. Also their is no mention of the future. Because of our current situation the way finance will work will change. So saying you look forward to learning the financial models of the future gives you that forward thinking look. Hope that helpshttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PlsPersonalStatementApplyingFinance-Economics/hdchm/post.htm#600137Fri, 08 May 2009 19:46:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:600137durrani2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlsPersonalStatementApplyingFinance-Economics/hdchm/post.htm#600137http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-600137.xmlDear Friend you essay is quite good to get crystal idea what you want to say but it does contain some grammatical mistakes. It is recommended that email me your essayat my email ID: <removed by mod> , and be sure I woudl correct it for you, Good luckhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PlsPersonalStatementApplyingFinance-Economics/hdchm/post.htmWed, 08 Apr 2009 19:46:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:600095zoechoong3http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlsPersonalStatementApplyingFinance-Economics/hdchm/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-600095.xmlI am applying for MSc in Finance and Economics Please comment on my personal statement and it is urgent,lots of thanks... Every single day, we are exposing to tons of economic information from various sources, including newspapers, television, radio, magazines and the internet. But this overload of data and information are only representing a small part of the monumentally large and complicated puzzle that makes up the economy. Economic information often appears difficult, convoluted and ambiguous to be understood by anyone without an advanced degree in Economics to understand it. But it is essential to understand at least the basic mechanism of a nation’s economy as a better informed citizen. Because no matter economy is...