http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslGeneralEnglishGrammar-Questions/Forum12.htmAsk your questions on grammar and get your sentence checked. We answer lots of different types of general English grammar questions here. <font color=red>DO NOT post paragraphs and compositions here. Post them in our <a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm"><b>Essay, Report and Composition Writing Forum</b></a>.</font>enXMOD (Build: 3615.39139)http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedSomeoneCorrectCover-Letter/wpwlp/post.htm#744799Sun, 24 May 2009 01:20:17 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:744799debangkok0http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedSomeoneCorrectCover-Letter/wpwlp/post.htm#744799http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-744799.xmlThank you so much ,This is a valuable suggustion.http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedSomeoneCorrectCover-Letter/wpwlp/post.htm#744447Sat, 23 May 2009 19:49:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:744447AlpheccaStars1http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedSomeoneCorrectCover-Letter/wpwlp/post.htm#744447http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-744447.xmldebangkok: I have made a few suggestions. Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apply for the credit analysis position in response to your advertisement in Jobsdb.com. I graduated from KH (you might give the location of this school) University and hold with a bachelors degree from the faculty of Economics, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Vietnamese Food business. This gave me a great opportunity to enhance my entrepreneurship.I have learn ed how to operate a real business as an entrepreneurial owner , including marketing and sales, problem solving and dealing with department store s . (It is not clear if the department stores were customers or...http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedSomeoneCorrectCover-Letter/wpwlp/post.htmSat, 23 May 2009 18:44:47 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:744377debangkok2http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedSomeoneCorrectCover-Letter/wpwlp/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments12-744377.xmlI would like apply a job in credit analysis ,please correct it to me 111 As Rd., bby ,bkk Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apply for the credit analysis position in response to your advertisement in Jobsdb.com. I graduated from KH University and hold a bachelors degree from the faculty of Economics, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Vietnamese Food business. This gave me a great opportunity to enhance my entrepreneurship.I have learned a real business, including marketing and sales, problem solving and dealing with department store. In addition, I had been employed as customer service representative (credit anaysis) in Citi Group.I was...